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Maarel
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mosobot64
Apr 15, 2011, 6:55:39 PM
The subject is simple.
The artist has taken it far.
I'll critque in haiku.
The colour is bright.
The texture is spot on.
The motion allures.
I notice the way
You've played dark against light
The waves seem alive.
But I wonder why
You made the foam purple?
There is no sunset.
Nonetheless.
I envy your skill with a brush.
It looks digital.
Well done, sir, thankyou
You've inspired me simply
By painted waves.
-Mosobot64
PS. Okay, so that was more of a series of haikus, but that poem-ish thing is more or less reflective of how this work made me feel.
The Artist thought this was FAIR
43 out of 44 deviants thought this was fair.
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Maarel
Apr 15, 2011
Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks a lot
It's wonderful
I like it very much)
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mosobot64
Apr 15, 2011
Student General Artist
Thanks.
Well, I treated myself to a quick look at your gallery, I think I'll watch ya!
-Mosobot64
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Maarel
Apr 15, 2011
Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You are so sweet
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mosobot64
Apr 15, 2011
Student General Artist
Seems justified in my opinion. I'm here for the art-y goodness, after all.
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The artist has taken it far.
I'll critque in haiku.
The colour is bright.
The texture is spot on.
The motion allures.
I notice the way
You've played dark against light
The waves seem alive.
But I wonder why
You made the foam purple?
There is no sunset.
Nonetheless.
I envy your skill with a brush.
It looks digital.
Well done, sir, thankyou
You've inspired me simply
By painted waves.
-Mosobot64
PS. Okay, so that was more of a series of haikus, but that poem-ish thing is more or less reflective of how this work made me feel.